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The Inheritance
By ralst

 

Act I

ext. back alley - day

Sarah looks in confusion at a rusted doorway. Johnathan looks at her condescendingly, while Mr Tanner sorts through papers in his briefcase.

sarah

This is his book store?

Mr Tanner

Book store?

SARAH

Dad's book store? The one I've just inherited?

Mr Tanner

Ms Perry, I never mentioned a book store.

Mr Tanner riffles through his papers before producing a document and passing it to Sarah.

Mr Tanner

Your father's business interests were quite diverse but his main source of income came from 'The Palace'.

Mr Tanner indicated the door before leading the other two into the dark interior.

INT. DARK CLUB - DAY

johnathan

This doesn't look like any book store I've ever seen.

SARAH

Mr Tanner?

Lights come on. The interior is revealed to be an empty strip club.

SARAH

What the hell?

JOHNATHAN

Jesus.

Mr Tanner

I take it you were unaware of the extent of your father's interests?

SARAH

I thought he ran a little second hand book store. I can't believe...

JOHNATHAN

(To Mr Tanner)

You said his interests were diverse?

Mr Tanner

That is correct.

SARAH

He owned a strip joint?

JOHNATHAN

(To Mr Tanner)

How diverse?

Mr Tanner

He bought 'The Palace' twelve years ago, along with a considerable amount of real estate.

Johnathan pulls a resisting Sarah into his arms.

JOHNATHAN

We're freaking rich!

SARAH

He bought a strip club?

Sarah shrugs of Johnathan's hold and starts to pace the small area between the door and the first set of tables and chairs.

SARAH

I don't believe it. I just don't believe it.

Mr Tanner

The business is very lucrative...

SARAH

Oh, great! So my father wasn't just an exploiter of women, he was a successful exploiter of women! My women's studies teacher would be so proud.

Mr Tanner shuffles through his papers and ignores the outburst.

JOHNATHAN

Hon, let it go.

SARAH

He owned a strip club!

Mr Tanner

And a laundromat, fifty percent of an Italian restaurant and two apartment buildings.

JOHNATHAN

Two...?

(He turns to speak directly to Sarah)

Did you hear that? Your old man was some piece of work. We're freakin' rich!

A dark-haired woman, Anna, wearing a fluffy toweling robe appears from a back room.

anna

Hey! Who the hell are you?

Sarah stops dead in her tracks and stares at the new arrival. Mr Tanner takes a step forward.

Mr Tanner

Ms Carlson, isn't it? My name's James Tanner, we met at Edgar's funeral.

ANNA

Yeah.

(She looks condescendingly towards Sarah and Johnathan)

Well if your friends are lookin' for a free show, they're outta luck.

Mr Tanner

I can assure you...

SARAH

I would never...

JOHNATHAN

When's the next show?

SARAH

Johnathan!

ANNA

Look, whoever you are, why don't you go back to your little trailer park and watch Oprah. Some of us are in mourning and don't have time for this shit.

Mr Tanner

Ms Carlson, I don't think you understand...

ANNA

Oh, I understand perfectly. Old Ed's not even cold in his grave and already you're trying to muscle in on his operation and install your little librarian and her Ken doll in his place.

Mr Tanner

I would never...

ANNA

Can it! If you think we're gonna let you steal this place out from under his kid, you've got another thing comin'. Ed might have been a randy old leach but he adored that little brat of his and there's not one girl in this place that'll let you cheat her out of a single penny.

Mr Tanner

Ms Perry...

Sarah crosses to Mr Tanner and snatches the forms out of his hand, before striding towards Anna and thrusting them in her face.

SARAH

I can't steal what I already own.

Anna grabs the papers out of Sarah's hand and reads them.

ANNA

You're his kid?

(To Mr Tanner)

Is she shitting me?

Mr Tanner

I can assure you...

ANNA

We all thought you were a kid.

Anna gives Sarah a very unsubtle once over.

ANNA

Pfft. You're hardly his golden haired little angel.

Johnathan tries to intervene as Sarah takes a menacing step forward.

SARAH

I might not be the reincarnation of Shirley Temple...

ANNA

She's not dead.

SARAH

but I am your boss!

int. strip club's office - day

Sarah sits at a big oak desk. The desk is covered in loose papers, with an over-flowing ashtray perched precariously on the edge. Johnathan lounges on the large leather couch listening to the music coming from the club below.

SARAH

Did you know they have theme nights? Cowgirls, schoolgirls, nuns, even? It's... it's disgusting.

JOHNATHAN

Yeah, but they're not real nuns, right? 'Cause real nuns would just be...

Johnathan smiles lecherously and Sarah throws a balled up piece of paper in his direction.

SARAH

You need help.

JOHNATHAN

Come on, it's just sex.

SARAH

It is not! What they do is.. it's disgusting. My father peddled flesh for a living and now I'm expected to follow in his grubby little footsteps and choose between naughty nurses and glamourous geishas for next week's theme night.

JOHNATHAN

Nurses. I've always had a thing for...

SARAH

I'm not doing it. He can't make me.

JOHNATHAN

Hon, you said it yourself, you're the boss, and that means you're responsible for all those writhing and sweat drenched bodies down there.

SARAH

Don't talk about them like that.

JOHNATHAN

Please, did you see that Anna girl? She was gorgeous. I can totally understand why your dad made her a headliner.

Sarah drops her head into her hands.

JOHNATHAN

Not that she's got anything on you, babe. I mean, you're a knock out.

SARAH

Shut up, Johnathan, before I decapitate you with the letter opener.

Sarah holds up the letter opener, which is shaped to resemble a woman's shapely legs.

SARAH

I'll talk to Tanner in the morning about putting this place up for sale.

JOHNATHAN

No naked ladies?

Sarah sweeps the papers off the desk and into the wastepaper bin.

SARAH

No naked ladies.

int. dressing room - night

Anna sits in front of a mirror applying her lipstick, and watching Candace and Ellie show off their new costumes.

candace

I don't know why we bother.

ELLIE

Com'on, Hon, you look great. The feathers really bring out the colour of your eyes.

Candace twirls.

CANDACE

I'm not talkin' about the outfit.

(She turns to address Anna)

My Gary says that now old man Perry's gone, the Donaldson brothers will be in here like a shot, and there's no way I'm working for those creeps.

ELLIE

Creeps.

ANNA

Don't sweat it.

CANDACE

Don't sweat it? Is that all you've got to say? I thought you, of all people, would be worried.

ELLIE

That Richie Donaldson is sure sweet on you.

CANDACE

Needs his head examinin'.

Anna and Ellie both turn a disbelieving look on Candace.

CANDACE

I only mean that he knows you're a dyke, so I dunno why he bothers.

ELLIE

'Cause he knows she's a dyke.

CANDACE

Huh?

ELLIE

Some guys get off on it.

CANDACE

That's a myth. My Gary said he hates the idea of me getting all sweaty and shit with another woman. Brings him out in hives.

ELLIE

Yeah, right. Every guy I've ever been with has practically worn the skin from his knees begging me to invite one of my friends over for a little play-date, and you can bet once the Donaldsons take over we'll be dyking it out nightly up on that stage.

CANDACE

No way! I'm not doin' that. A quick kiss an' a cuddle at Christmas time is one thing, but I'm not sharing the stage with anyone.

ANNA

It's not going to happen, okay? Just forget about the Donaldsons and concentrate on finding a new costume.

Anna silently surveys Candace's new costume.

ANNA

Because you look like a peacock on Viagra in that get up.

CANDACE

Hey!

Ellie laughs, and is promptly slapped by Candace.

ELLIE

Why're you slappin' me? Anna's the one who said it.

CANDACE

'Cause she'd slap me back.

INT. STRIP CLUB'S OFFICE - DAY

Sarah sits at the desk sorting through and discarding papers. There is a knock at the door.

SARAH

Come in.

Anna enters, once more wearing a fluffy toweling robe.

SARAH

Can I help you?

ANNA

Yeah.

Anna slowly surveys the room and the mess of papers littering the desk.

ANNA

I know you're busy sortin' out your father's affairs and shit, but the girls were wonderin' what you had planned for 'The Palace'?

SARAH

I see.

Sarah nervously shuffled through her papers.

SARAH

I'm still in the process of settling my father's estate, but I think it's safe to say I will be relinquishing control of this... establishment at the earliest opportunity.

ANNA

Shit. You've sellin' the place?

SARAH

As soon as it's gone through probate, yes.

ANNA

Great. Fuckin' great! I guess I might as well tell the girls to whore it up, 'cause that's exactly what they'll be doin' once the Donaldsons take over.

SARAH

The Donaldsons?

ANNA

The arse-holes that have been threatening to take over this place.

Anna perches on the edge of the desk, and Sarah sits back further in her chair, putting as much distance between them as she can.

ANNA

Your old man literally spit in their faces the last time they came callin' but I guess you don't have his spunk.

SARAH

Excuse me?

ANNA

I 'spose I expected too much, you bein' a woman and all.

SARAH

I have no idea what you're talking about.

Anna begins sifting idly through the papers on the desk, then picks one up and brandishes it in Sarah's face.

ANNA

Ted and Richie Donaldson, the scumbag brothers who own the 'Cat's Meow' and 'Ho, Ho Heaven' out by the airport.

Sarah quickly scans the letter.

SARAH

They've made offers?

ANNA

Repeatedly.

SARAH

But my father wouldn't sell?

ANNA

Never in a million years.

SARAH

I still don't see...

ANNA

The second this place goes on the market those two apes are going to round up the competition and explain to them, in slow and excruciating detail, exactly why they don't want to buy 'The Palace' and then they're gonna put in your one and only offer, which will just happen to be twenty grand or so lower than what the place is worth.

Sarah drops the letter.

ANNA

And then, once they've bought the place, they'll turn it into the sleaziest joint this side of Vegas.

SARAH

Sleazier than this?

Anna gives her a slow look.

ANNA

They'll make this place look like a nunnery.

The door opens and in walks Johnathan. He takes one look at Anna and his smile widens.

JOHNATHAN

We meet again.

ANNA

(To Sarah)

If you could just give us some time, maybe me and the girls could get together the right kind of backing to buy the place ourselves.

SARAH

I don't...

JOHNATHAN

There's no way you girls could ever come up with that kind of money. This place is worth a fortune in revenue alone.

Anna turns on Johnathan with a venomous look.

ANNA

I know! It's our tits and arse that brings in your fortune, remember?

(To Sarah)

All I'm askin' is that you give us a chance. 

SARAH

I'm not meeting with the lawyer until next week. If you can put together a proposal by then, I'll look into it. Right now, that's all I can promise.

ANNA

That's enough.

Anna leaves. Johnathan takes her place, leaning against the desk and facing Sarah.

JOHNATHAN

She's quite the little firecracker.

SARAH

Johnathan, don't.

JOHNATHAN

What? I'm just admiring her get up and go.

SARAH

Oh, is that why you were trying to peer down her robe? I thought you were just being a perv.

JOHNATHAN

Hey, I resent that. You can't expect a guy to walk in on two hot chicks fighting it out and not stop to look at what's on offer. That would just be criminal.

SARAH

She's not on offer.

(Sarah reaches for her bag)

And neither am I.

Sarah stands and walks from the room. Johnathan waits until she's left and then picks up the discarded letter from the Donaldsons.

ext. front of club - day

A man stands outside the club watching various people enter the building. Anna, Ellie, Mary-Ann and Julie approach the club chatting.

mary-ann

There's no way we can raise that kind of money. I don't know about y'all but if I had that kind of cash lying around, I sure as hell wouldn't be shakin' my booty for every low-life and prison reject to come through those doors.

ELLIE

If I had any money I'd buy myself one of those big screen TVs like they have in the window at Harvey's. It's got cinema surround sound and blue-ray.

julie

(Whispers)

As if you know what that means.

ELLIE

And Candace's Gary offered to help me install it.

JULIE

I'm sure he did.

ELLIE

What's that supposed to mean?

JULIE

What do you think it means?

ANNA

Cut it out you two.

ELLIE

She started it.

JULIE

(In whiny voice)

She started it.

MARY-ANN

Quiet, the both of you. The truth is we haven't a hope in hell of buying this place, and that can mean only one thing.

Anna opens the door for the other three women to pass through.

JULIE

The Donaldsons.

ANNA

Over my dead body.

The women enter the club. The man takes out his phone and places a call.

Man # 1

You were right, the bitches are trying to muscle in on our turf.

(A pause)

That dyke, Anna, and her friends.

(A contrite pause)

Sorry, Boss, I didn't mean nothin' by it.

(A pause)

Consider it done.

int. strip club main floor - day

Daylight streams into the room, highlighting its seedy design. Sarah walks between the tables and takes video of the room with a small hand-held camcorder. Anna, Ellie, Mary-Ann and Julie enter.

SARAH

(Speaking for the camera)

As you can see, the square footage is quite impressive and the establishment already has a liquor license, which I'm told are difficult to get hold of in this part of town.

Ellie walks up behind Sarah.

ELLIE

Whatcha doin'?

Sarah jumps and accidentally drops her camcorder.

SARAH

Fuck!

(She looks shocked at her expletive)

Please don't sneak up on me.

ELLIE

Sorry, Lady-Boss, I thought you heard us come in.

MARY-ANN

(Whispers to the other strippers)

We made enough noise.

Anna bypasses the others and bends down to retrieve the camcorder.

ANNA

You've cracked the screen.

(She tinkers with the controls)

But it still seems to be workin'.

SARAH

Thank you.

Sarah grabs back the camcorder, but appears embarrassed by her rudeness.

SARAH

I wasn't expecting anyone to be here.

JULIE

We always arrive about now.

MARY-ANN

I like to limber up before a performance.

(Mary-Ann moves in real close to Sarah and whispers seductively in her ear)

I pride myself on my flexibility.

Sarah moves back, next to Anna.

SARAH

But it's only four o'clock.

ANNA

It's Friday.

JULIE

We always get in early on a Friday.

MARY-ANN

I need to be extra limber for the weekend boys.

ANNA

And your old man used to pay us before our Friday sets. He said we'd be too exhausted to count the money if he gave it to us afterwards.

Ellie, Julie, Mary-Ann and Anna start to circle Sarah.

MARY-ANN

You have got our money, right?

ELLIE

Gary'll kill me if I go home empty handed.

JULIE

Mr Perry promised me a raise.

Anna, Ellie and Mary-Ann turn to look at Julie in astonishment.

MARY-ANN

A raise?

JULIE

He said he was gonna reward me for showing my dedication to 'The Palace'.

ELLIE

So it had nothing to do with you letting him jerk off over your tits the other week.

JULIE

I did not!

SARAH

Oh God.

Sarah starts backing away. Mary-Ann moves to block her path.

MARY-ANN

Hey, Lady-Boss, where'd you think you're going?

SARAH

I can't... I can't listen to this.

MARY-ANN

(To Ellie)

Cut the jerk off talk, you're scaring the little rich girl.

(To Sarah)

What about our money?

SARAH

I don't know anything about it.

ELLIE

I cannot go home empty handed.

JULIE

You're not the only one.

MARY-ANN

We want our money, lady, and don't think you can dick us around just because your old man croaked.

ANNA

Mary-Ann, that's enough.

MARY-ANN

Don't go telling me what to do, dyke, I was here long before your sorry ass ever showed up.

Anna took a menacing step forward.

ANNA

I said, that's enough.

Ellie and Julie look at one another before choosing sides and moving behind Anna. Sarah stays rooted to the spot.

MARY-ANN

(Under her breath)

I've had enough of this macho-crap.

(To Anna)

I'm gonna go get changed. You take care of little miss lady-boss.

Mary-Ann exits and seconds later Julie and Ellie follow her into the back rooms. Sarah looks at Anna nervously. Anna sits on the edge of the stage.

ANNA

So, what's with the camera, you planning on selling this place on e-bay?

Sarah perches on the edge of a table, putting some distance between them.

SARAH

I was thinking about re-envisioning the place.

ANNA

Re-envisioning?

SARAH

Turning it into a restaurant or cafe.

ANNA

A restaurant? Are you kidding me? This is a titty bar and it's never gonna be anything else.

SARAH

I don't see why...

ANNA

This place is in the middle of fucking nowhere. Do you really think anyone would come all this way if they didn't think they were gonna catch sight of some girl's pussy?

Sarah becomes visibly uncomfortable at the description.

SARAH

I could employ the women here as waitresses.

ANNA

A topless bar?

SARAH

No, I didn't mean...

ANNA

You need more than swaying boobs to get the bozos this far outta town. Hell, your old man had to introduce fetish and freaks nights just to keep the customers rolling in.

SARAH

What?

(Sarah shakes her head)

I don't want to know.

ANNA

Look, honey, if you're gonna be in the strip club business, however temporary, you gotta learn to stop squirmin' every time someone takes a left turn away from the vanilla.

SARAH

What?

ANNA

Sex. Fucking. Tits and ass. It's what we sell here.

SARAH

I thought you said yesterday that this wasn't a brothel?

Anna snorts in derision, then jumps down from the stage and stalks quickly to Sarah. She leans into Sarah's body, trapping her against the table.

ANNA

Believe me, honey, you don't have to touch someone to make them come. One session with me and you'd swear blind you'd been fucked three ways from Christmas and I wouldn't have to lay a finger on you.

Sarah is transfixed for a moment until she suddenly pushes Anna away.

SARAH

What is wrong with you? Do you actually enjoy selling your body up on that stage or something? I'm offering you a way out.

ANNA

You're offering me nothing.

Anna stalks by Sarah on her way to the door leading to the back rooms. She turns and speaks over her shoulder just as she passes Sarah.

ANNA

You just make sure and get us our money by the end of the evening or you'll have a posse of pissed off strippers on your tail.

INT. STRIP CLUB'S OFFICE - DAY

Sarah paces the office. Johnathan lazily watches her progress from his position lounging on the couch. The sound of disco/pop drums against the walls.

SARAH

She hates me. She does. She's probably down there right now riling up the woman into a mob set on lynching me from the tallest building.

JOHNATHAN

Uh huh.

SARAH

You should have seen her. All sex appeal and heaving cleavage, as if she's the only woman in the world who could get me hot.

JOHNATHAN

Uh huh

SARAH

So what if she's gorgeous? It's not as if I care. She could strip naked and perform her routine on the top of my desk and I wouldn't even blink.

JOHNATHAN

No blinking.

SARAH

I don't care what she says, it would take more than the likes of her gyrating in my face for me to come.

JOHNATHAN

Uh huh.

(Johnathan suddenly sits up)

She ... You ... What?

SARAH

Then she had the temerity to threaten me! Can you believe it?

JOHNATHAN

Hold on, go back a moment, what was that about her stripping naked and gyrating over you on your desk?

SARAH

What? Have you been drinking.

JOHNATHAN

You said...

SARAH

That woman is out to ruin me! First she's all 'please give us a chance to buy this wonderful club' but then her sister Ms Hyde takes over and she's threatening to unleash a pack of rabid former beauty queens on me if I don't get them their money.

JOHNATHAN

Rabid beauty queens?

SARAH

Former beauty queens. I read it in one of my father's files. Ellie, Lesley, Julie and Anna were all 'Miss Somewhere or other' before they descended into a life of degradation.

(Johnathan looks even more confused)

Before they became strippers.

JOHNATHAN

I bet back stage at those competitions would have been worth seeing.

SARAH

Mind out of the gutter, please.

JOHNATHAN

Sorry, babe, but you're the one who brought up gyrating naked strippers, not me.

SARAH

But I'm not the one drooling at the prospect.

JOHNATHAN

I don't know about that, you seem pretty hot and bothered to me.

(He stands and approaches Sarah cautiously)

Maybe we could invite Anna round one night and exorcise these little fantasies of yours?

SARAH

Pervert!

JOHNATHAN

I'm just saying...

There is a knock at the door and before either of them can answer it swings open and Candace walks in. Candace is wearing her stage costume.

CANDACE

Miss?

JOHNATHAN

Well, hello there.

SARAH

(To Johnathan)

Down boy.

(To Candace)

Is there something you need er...?

CANDACE

Candace.

SARAH

Is there something you need, Candace?

CANDACE

No Miss.

(Candace takes a step back towards the door)

It's just that... Well, it's Anna, she wanted me to remind you that the deadline is fast approachin' and you really don't want to miss it if you plan on stayin' in business. That's her words, Miss, not mine.

SARAH

Thank you Candace.

CANDACE

Sorry Miss.

(Candace turns to leave but then turns back to add)

She don't mean nothing by it. Anna, that is. She's just worried about the girls and what'll happen if the Donaldsons get hold of this place.

SARAH

I know you're all concerned.

CANDACE

Yeah, but it's worse for Anna, what with Richie tryin' to get in her knickers all the time, and havin' to support Emily all on her own.

SARAH

Emily? She has a partner?

JOHNATHAN

(Whispers)

Try not to be too disappointed.

CANDACE

No, Miss, Emily's her little girl.

SARAH

She's got a daughter?

CANDACE

Yeah. A number of the girls have got family.

SARAH

I didn't... Thank you, Candace, please tell Anna that I'll be down to discuss the situation as soon as Mr Tanner arrives.

CANDACE

Okay, Miss.

Candace leaves.

JOHNATHAN

You're giving in?

SARAH

I'm paying them what they're owed. Nothing more.

JOHNATHAN

Sure, babe, whatever you say.

INT. STRIP CLUB MAIN FLOOR - night

As the last of the customers leaves the lights come on and the bar staff rush out to start clearing the tables and sweep the floors. Sarah enters from a side door, followed by Mr Tanner and Johnathan.

SARAH

(To Mr Tanner)

Why don't you set up on one of those tables.

(she indicates one of the larger round tables that circles the stage)

I'll go inform the women that we're ready for them.

JOHNATHAN

I can do that.

SARAH

If you think I'm letting you within a mile of that dressing room you're even stupider than you look.

JOHNATHAN

Hey!

SARAH

I mean it, Johnathan, stay away from the dancers.

JOHNATHAN

Jealous, are we?

SARAH

Don't be obtuse. I just don't want them to catch anything.

JOHNATHAN

Hey!

Sarah exits through the dressing room door behind the stage. Johnathan sits on the table where Mr Tanner is busily counting out money and checking off items on his PDA.

JOHNATHAN

That's a lot of money for doing nothing more than waggling your tail.

MR TANNER

I believe Mr Perry paid his employees the standard rate, plus a small benefits package.

JOHNATHAN

All that and benefits too? I think I'm in the wrong profession.

MR TANNER

And what profession would that be?

JOHNATHAN

Oh, you know...

Johnathan stands up and starts walking towards the dressing room door when it opens and Sarah emerges followed by Anna, Mary-Ann, Candace, Julie, Ellie and six other women.

SARAH

If you'd like to form an orderly line.

(Sarah indicates the table at which Mr Tanner is sitting patiently)

CANDACE

Yes Miss.

MARY-ANN

Suck up.

CANDACE

Am not!

Ellie and Julie take the opportunity to sneak passed the squabbling dancers.

MARY-ANN

Hey, bitch, I was first!

JULIE

You snooze, you loose.

ELLIE

Yeah.

MARY-ANN

(whispers)

Fuckin' parrot.

ANNA

Can we hurry this up? I'd like to get home before Christmas.

ELLIE

It's May.

ANNA

Exactly.

JOHNATHAN

If any of you ladies would like a ride home...?

The women all turn and give him a bored look.

ANNA

(To Sarah)

You might want to keep your boy-toy on a leash.

MARY-ANN

Or muzzled.

SARAH

I'll keep that in mind.

(To Johnathan)

Try and behave like the gentleman your parents foolishly think you are.

JOHNATHAN

I was offering to escort these fine ladies back to their homes. You can't get more gentlemanly than that.

SARAH

Sure you were, Johnathan, just like you were only helping that blonde with her Yoga positions last month.

JOHNATHAN

I explained about...

JULIE

Ohhh, someone's in trouble.

JOHNATHAN

Hey! I don't need any comments from the peanut gallery.

ANNA

Not even if they come wrapped around a lapdance?

Sarah and Johnathan both turn to stare at Anna, the wonton expressions on their faces errily similar.

MR TANNER

(To Anna)

Ms Carlson?

(Anna steps up to the table)

If you'd just sign here.

ANNA

Thanks.

As Anna counts her money the main doors bang open and Ted and Richie Donaldson stride into the club and towards where Mr Tanner is sitting.

ted

(To Mr Tanner)

Tanner, where's the new...

Richie

(To Anna)

Hey, Anna, you're lookin' good. Do ya fancy goin' out for a meal with me later? I know the best Indian joint. The curry will blow your mind.

TED

(Shouts at Richie)

Richie? I'm talkin' business here! Save your pussy chasin' 'til later.

Anna moves as if to attack Ted but Mary-Ann quickly steps in her way and diffuses the situation.

Richie

Don't go talkin' about her like that.

TED

Stop being so pussy-whipped, you moron, and concentrate on why we're here.

Sarah comes forward to stand before the Donaldsons.

SARAH

And why exactly are you here?

Ted Donaldson looks Sarah up and down very slowly before turning to address Mr Tanner.

TED

She Ed's kid?

MR TANNER

Ms Perry is Edgar's daughter, yes.

SARAH

I asked why you were here.

TED

(He smiles widely and approaches Sarah until they're less than a foot apart)

I wanted to send condolences about your old man. Me and Ed go way back, don't we Richie.

Richie

Oh yeah, he was like a second father to us.

TED

Really broke me up when he croaked.

Richie

It did.

SARAH

Thank you.

(Sarah gestures towards the entrance)

Now if that's all, I'm sure we'd all like to get to bed. It is quite late.

TED

Sure, sure. What we've got to say won't take long.

SARAH

Really? I thought you'd already more than adequately expressed your condolences.

JOHNATHAN

Sarah, honey, hear them out.

All eyes turn on Johnathan who strides forward and offers his hand to first Ted and then Richie.

JOHNATHAN

Johnathan Taylor, Ms Perry's fiance.

ANNA

Fiance?

SARAH

Ex-fiance.

JOHNATHAN

Don't lets quibble over techniqualities.

(To Ted)

Perhaps we should take this discussion to the office? I'm sure the girls have places to be and wouldn't want to be bothered with all this shop talk.

MARY-ANN

Pfft! Arse-hole.

ANNA

If this concerns us, I'm sure we'd all rather stay.

Richie

Don't worry, Anna, I could stay down here and keep you company.

SARAH

I don't think that'll be necessary. If you have something to say, gentlemen, I suggest you make an appointment. Right now I'm far too tired to discuss anything.

TED

It'll only take a...

SARAH

Tomorrow, gentlemen.

JOHNATHAN

Hon, don't you think...

SARAH

Goodnight.

Ted and Richie reluctantly turn to leave.

Richie

Anna, do you want a ride home? I brought the beemer.

ANNA

No.

Richie

We go right by your place. I could even pop up and say hello to little Emily.

ANNA

I said no.

Ted pulls his brother to the door and they both leave.

JULIE

(To Anna)

He sure is sweet on you.

ANNA

Oh lucky me.

To Be Continued

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